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Tue, Jul 19 2016 11:06 AM (9 replies)
  • adaputter
    1,954 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 1:12 PM

     

    To ding, or not to ding: that is the question:

    Whether 'tis better in the game to suffer

    The dings  and slices of outrageous fortune,

    Or to take deep breaths against a wgt of troubles,

    And by opposing end them? To ding: to to fade a shot;

    No more; and by a good shot to say we end

    The heart-ache and the thousand natural shots

    That flash player screws our game is why we say 'tis a consummation

    Devoutly to be wish'd. To die, to sleep;

    To sleep: perchance to dream: ay, there's the club;

    For in that shot of death we hope what dreams may come

    When we have pitched ,flop our way out of trouble off this mortal deep rough or fescue

    Must give us a chance wgt: there's the respect

    That makes this game of so long life;

    For who would bear the slices and oobs of time,

    The player frowns wrong, the player screams.wtf wgt? 

    The pangs of despised lies, the wgt,s delay,

    The insolence of of outer beings or what nots and the spurns

    That patient merit of the unworthy shots,

    When wgt himself might his quietus make

    With a full iron shot? who would drop it short,

    To grunt and sweat under a weary game

    But that the dread of something after what was going well

    The  country club from whose you played

    No traveller returns,the puzzle of wgt will always be played

    And makes us rather bear those ills wgt have

    The pars come to others that we know not why

    Thus conscience does make betters players of us all;

    And thus the native hue of negative  resolution

    Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought,

    And enterprises of great pitch and backspin

    With this regard their current tiers turn awry,

    And lose the name of action. - Soft you now!

    Be all my sins remember'd.

  • drmoose
    3,538 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 2:18 PM

    Methinks thou hast been dealt the swings and errors of outrageous misplacement. Alas, 'tis a calamity which befalleth us all. 

    Doc :)

  • bubbsboy
    6,879 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 2:26 PM

    Great read, clever stuff

  • mkg335
    5,491 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 2:28 PM

    Well it's obviously not a tale told by an idiot, so I like it.

  • WigerToods2010
    8,446 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 3:21 PM

    Raise a cup in cheer...

    "Bottom's up!"

  • adaputter
    1,954 Posts
    Mon, Jul 18 2016 3:56 PM

    a long read but i hope you enjoyed it

  • BKHolden
    1,231 Posts
    Tue, Jul 19 2016 8:43 AM

    "Brevity is the soul of wit"

  • BKHolden
    1,231 Posts
    Tue, Jul 19 2016 8:46 AM

    drmoose:

    Methinks thou hast been dealt the swings and errors of outrageous misplacement. Alas, 'tis a calamity which befalleth us all. 

    Doc :)

    lol : )

     

  • PaulTon
    10,731 Posts
    Tue, Jul 19 2016 10:11 AM

                      "my take on shakespare give feed back bad or good"

     

        

     

    Sorry Ade, had to be said!

    Good work by the way.

     

  • adaputter
    1,954 Posts
    Tue, Jul 19 2016 11:06 AM

    PaulTon:

                      "my take on shakespare give feed back bad or good"

     

        

     

    Sorry Ade, had to be said!

    Good work by the way.

     

    pmsl m8

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