Hi Ollie,
You need to play plenty more golf first - then we can have a look at your stats. They will not mean anything at this point in time. Play 18 holes everyday for a month, then we might have some decent stats to review.
There is heaps of advice, and tips on the forums and there are plenty of people who can help you - however, its something you have to do yourself. Learn the basics of the game, then start to refine. Then you can look at your stats.
My advice - PRACTICE, PRACTICE PRACTICE. Sorry, but its the only way :-)
Happy playin.
Cheers Doug