I am more into the old fashion type for music. My young times were the 80's music, but still enjoyed a lot of 60's rock'n roll, 70's and of course from 90's to the present it all sounds very ELECTRONIC to me.
Coming from back there, it's hard for me to call "song" a musical piece that I can't actually "sing along". The greatest songs of all times share a few things that always catch our attention : A good beat, a nice sound, good and whistle-able melody (memorable) and few catchy lines, but the most important thing of all ... a hook.
With that said, your tune is something different. To me it appeals more like a story you are telling, using audio elements, tossing some voices, sounds and even "Superman Theme" to get one's attention to your final wrapping on the last three minutes where we can see the real song you were taking us to.
I like the concept. The listener has to put in self interpretation into it and yes my friend : It has a great hook at the end.
I would suggest a shorter version, focusing more into those last three minutes or so, only for broadcasting purposes or promo, because the introduction is a time-luxury that most people and media don't have in terms of attention.
Bottom line : I liked it, I thank you for sharing it here and I wish you the best with your upcoming material ... Cheers !